Thursday, April 8, 2010
Thesis topic
A small farm is beneficial to the animals and society verses the large factory farm, the dangers involve with factory farms are not worth the risk. The solution to this problem starts with slowing the factory farms down, or branching the company to down to the small farms. Also making the small farms more appealing to the public for creating new jobs.
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I never thought of this issue before, very original and cool. Although your solution would probably be very difficult to accomplish considering the present day demand for food and the speed to process it as well as the cost. Maybe there is another way to decrease factory farms or fix their methods in which they process things?
ReplyDeleteI agree with your topic. It's in the best interest of the animals of today's society for a better way to provide for the community. Perhaps dwell on their side of the story? :)
ReplyDeleteI dont really know much about farming so I cant really relate to your topic. I am confused about the problem you are trying to solve, you should make the issue more clear to the reader.
ReplyDeleteInteresting topic but make sure that you clearly state the "problem".
ReplyDeleteGreat original topic. I could see where you are coming from. You should think about rewording all of it to make both "the issue" and the "solution(s)" more clear. Good job other wise man.
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